What's in a Name
Friday
In the early hours of the day outside the county collectorate office . A car stopped by , and a lady wearing a black overcoat came out of the car and went straight inside . She was greeted by an elderly lady at the enquiries counter , "Good morning Ma'am ,How can I help you ? ” Pulling out her gloves the lady in a hurried tone replied , “Good morning , I want to lodge a complaint.”
The old clerk in a curious manner asked , “ Ma'am complaint. Regarding what and that too in such early hours.” The lady shot back, “ Yes , I intend to lodge a complaint regarding the sheer negligence shown by the administration in my name spelling.”
“ But ma'am we have an online system that looks into such matters. I'm sure they would solve your issue at the earliest .”
“Earliest , it's been 3 weeks since I filed my online application . And nothing has changed . I have run out of patience please provide me with a complaint form.”
The old lady hurriedly went inside and while looking for the complaints file folder fumingly said ", what's in a bloody name. ”
She came back with a complaint form and handed it over to the lady . The lady took it at once and started filling up the details . The old lady interrupted and said with a pause , “ But ma'am it's early hours and the complaints are looked into only post 1 PM.”
The lady in a state of disbelief , stopped for a moment and then went on with the form. After filling the details she handed over the form back to the lady and in a persuasive manner said “Ma'am please try to look into this matter , My name is not Aisha ,not Aisa , it's AIZA . The county officials have been very reckless in their job and I am suffering because of that . I am headed back to India today with my daughter and would be returning in another 20 days.”
The clerk meanwhile started checking on the room heater and replied back , “Sure ma'am . We'll look into it . ”
The lady hurriedly started walking out of the office and grumbled . “ Bloody , these people can never understand the importance of a name and all that is attached to it. ”
She remembered how her mother used to tell her of the days when her uncle who was a Mufti had appropriated a date for her Name giving and after intense deliberation with his close friends named her Aiza .
‘ It's always a sense of nostalgia that lures us , when we are bound towards a familiar destination ’.
She came out of the office with a smiling face and entered the car . Her 7 year old baby girl was sitting alongside fidgeting with her Rubik's cube. She at once asked “ Amma , what took you so long ? ” She said “ nothing sweetie , it's just paperwork.” And they drove to the airport.
While entering the airport , Zara in a jubilant mood told her mother . “ Amma I am really excited for this trip to India , all my friends in school would be celebrating Christmas , everyday they teased me with something or the other then one day I shouted out loud , I'm going to Inndiaaa in their ears ”.
Aiza upon hearing her daughter's sense of humour laughed and gave her a kiss.
It was a long 12 hour journey and the plane was due to land at around 9 AM. Aiza was fast asleep , and was woken up as her daughter shook her hand hastily . “ Amma see I solved the Rubik's cube ” , Aiza said “congratulations darling , now get ready we're about to reach Delhi ”. From the window Aiza looked outside and she could see The Humayun's Tomb she took Zara on her lap and in a hushed voice started telling her , “ you look at that dome structure , that's Humayun's Tomb . That's where your naana used to take me when I was your age and he used to carry me on his back in circles in those lawns around the tomb ” . Zara looking at the monument , giggled "Amma you must have been a fat kid in your childhood ” .
Suddenly , the plane's engine emitted roaring sounds and it started elevating . Few minutes later the aircraft hit turbulence and everyone inside panicked and started looking around , the air hostesses in a state of distress asked everyone to maintain calm and keep wearing their seat belts . Trying to stop the roaring noise of the engine Zara covered her ears and her Rubik's cube fell on the floor .
The plane hit another heavy turbulence , and the flight lost its balance .
With death staring in the face of all the passengers , they started crying and looking here and there for help . Some elderly passengers started reciting their prayer beads . Others shouted for help . Oxygen masks came down and after few minutes , the International flight A4 6789 from London to New Delhi crashed in the outskirts of the national capital .
Aiza suddenly woke up to the sound of wailing all around the aircraft , her vision was blurry and she couldn't move . Then she felt blood oozing out from her stomach , a shrapnel had pierced through her body . She looked to her left and saw her baby girl Zara lying on the floor , as if she was peacefully asleep .
Passed on from this world like a feather with no pain and damage .
In her last moments , Aiza could see her Father giving her a smile and walking towards her as in trying to indicate a last ride on his back , this time all the way to the heavens.
Sunday 8.30 AM , Old Delhi
Before opening the shop on weekends , Mahmood Alam would follow a rule of making his grandson read out the news from an English Newspaper . As Mahmood went on unlocking the shutter his grandson started reading the front news .
"Yesterday , The International Flight A4 6789 crashed on the outskirts of the national capital . All 137 passengers on-board dead. The identification of the dead bodies is underway as of now 6 passengers have been identified , namely James Hope , Karan , Siddharth , Jessica , Aiza Jameel and Zara Jameel .
Mahmood at once stopped , his hands were shaking and he said in a broken voice . " Say again the last two names " . The grandson replied " Aiza Jameel and Zara Jameel. "
Mahmood Alam collapsed on the floor and in a sobbing tone told his grandson " Take me to Aiza's house in Chandni Chowk right now " . But how do you know her , asked his grandchild in a perplexed mood .
I'm the one who named her so many years ago , his uncle was my colleague and my dear friend .
“ Aiza , My dear child , Aiza ”, the old man wailed in his grandchild's lap .
Beautiful.
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